ok, and here is the second lettered page...
if you look at the order i uploaded the original art, you might notice that this was actually the first page i finished the art for, but it wound up being the second page in the story... i actually can't remember which page i started drawing first... it might have even been a page other than these two...

Anyhow, I think I can officially start posting this stuff on my comics website.  It is way unfinished, but it merits having a place amongst "in the process of being dorkified" comics at my comics website...  I'm pretty excited!!  This project might be totally dorky, but it is dorky with a definite form and shape... It has a concreteness of dork.  Read on.  What do you think?