ok, and here is the second lettered page...
if you look at the order i uploaded the original art, you might notice that this was actually the first page i finished the art for, but it wound up being the second page in the story... i actually can't remember which page i started drawing first... it might have even been a page other than these two...

Anyhow, I think I can officially start posting this stuff on my comics website.  It is way unfinished, but it merits having a place amongst "in the process of being dorkified" comics at my comics website...  I'm pretty excited!!  This project might be totally dorky, but it is dorky with a definite form and shape... It has a concreteness of dork.  Read on.  What do you think?

too dorky?

ok!  First attempt at adding a story to this new project...  I might keep this story or change it alltogether. I'm not sure yet.  Best to let it sit a few days and see how I feel about it... Anyhow, no matter what, there will be more pages of art coming, and I will also start lettering the other finished page too... (right now I have two pages of finished art and two more pages of incomplete art)... What do you think of this story?  Too cliche?  Too dorky?

my first attempt:

another page commin attcha!

onward through the fog!

these pages are slow coming, but they are coming...

i was going to finish four of them and then add the text to make it into a four page story, but i got irritated waiting for the art for all four pages to be finished, so now i think i am going to just start adding text as i go... and since i'll be having that little bit of upfront pleasure, i suppose there is no reason to limit this story to four pages anymore...